The Mystery Moonlight
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The Mystery Moonlight
GwynethLove Presents:
{The Mystery Moonlight}
Characters:
Mary- a 16 year old girl who finds out about a mysterious moonlight that shined in her backyard.
Jacob- a boy who disappears at morning and appears at night in Mary's backyard.
Mrs. Edwards- Mary's 6th grade teacher who teaches Mary at Sea-Bill Middle School.
Ryan- Mary's classmate & 16 year old friend who is always lazy at school but isn't when Mary and Sierra hang out with him.
Sierra- Mary's 16 year old best friend who finds out about the Mystery Moonlight at one of Mary's Sleepover Party.
NEW! Brian- Mary's 18 year old brother who is tired of sister Stephanie cause she is taking his iPod.
NEW! Stephanie- Mary's 19 year old sneaky sister to take Brian's iPod but can't keep it because Mary sees her EVERYTIME..
New characters: Brian and Stephanie
{The Mystery Moonlight}
Characters:
Mary- a 16 year old girl who finds out about a mysterious moonlight that shined in her backyard.
Jacob- a boy who disappears at morning and appears at night in Mary's backyard.
Mrs. Edwards- Mary's 6th grade teacher who teaches Mary at Sea-Bill Middle School.
Ryan- Mary's classmate & 16 year old friend who is always lazy at school but isn't when Mary and Sierra hang out with him.
Sierra- Mary's 16 year old best friend who finds out about the Mystery Moonlight at one of Mary's Sleepover Party.
NEW! Brian- Mary's 18 year old brother who is tired of sister Stephanie cause she is taking his iPod.
NEW! Stephanie- Mary's 19 year old sneaky sister to take Brian's iPod but can't keep it because Mary sees her EVERYTIME..
New characters: Brian and Stephanie
Last edited by GwynethLove on Sun May 08, 2011 9:48 pm; edited 1 time in total
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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Coooool! xD Sounds really interesting! Cant wait to read it the 1st chapter (:
BabvRocksGirl- Novice Bear
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Chapter 1:
Mary Ellengrace, a girl who seen something in her life, and still remembered what was going on in her middle school life, about...The Mystery Moonlight. And this was how it began:
One morning Mary woke up and changed her clothes, brushed her teeth, combed her hair, ate breakfast, and went on the bus for school. Ryan Russo, the first ever lazier boy in Se-Bill Middle School was playing a video game on the bus.
Mary: Ryan... you know my code.. Please scoot over.
-Ryan scoots over-
-Mary looks at Ryan's video game-
Mary: what's that video game called?
Ryan: Robot City 2, the coolest game ever!
Then Sierra, Mary's best friend came and Mary and Ryan scooted over.
Sierra: hi Mary.
Mary: hi Sierra! I'm having a sleepover party for the girls, wanna come?
Sierra: I would love too! I'll bring cupcakes and popcorn.
Mary: ok. Don't forget your sleeping bag.
Sierra: oh! And that too!
Ryan (grinning): Sleepover Party! Can I come?
Mary: It's a girl party, Ryan.
Ryan: but..
Then the bus took off.
Mary: no buts, It's a girl party, and we're having pink cupcakes, right Sierra?
Sierra: correct! And with red roses made out of icing too!
Ryan: ugh..
Later at Sea-Bill Middle School..........
Bus driver: ok middle-schoolers! Out of the bus!
-All the students gets out of the bus, including Ryan, Mary, and Sierra -
Then everyone went inside to unpack in their lockers. Mary and Sierra's lockers were by each other, while Ryan had his locker across from Sierra 's locker. Everyone got their books and left for class.
Ryan: I don't get it. Why do we have to learn instead of playing around?
Sierra: That was old times Ryan. Now were big. Let's just talk about it later at lunch.
To Be Continued in Chapter two of.....The Mystery Moonlight
Mary Ellengrace, a girl who seen something in her life, and still remembered what was going on in her middle school life, about...The Mystery Moonlight. And this was how it began:
One morning Mary woke up and changed her clothes, brushed her teeth, combed her hair, ate breakfast, and went on the bus for school. Ryan Russo, the first ever lazier boy in Se-Bill Middle School was playing a video game on the bus.
Mary: Ryan... you know my code.. Please scoot over.
-Ryan scoots over-
-Mary looks at Ryan's video game-
Mary: what's that video game called?
Ryan: Robot City 2, the coolest game ever!
Then Sierra, Mary's best friend came and Mary and Ryan scooted over.
Sierra: hi Mary.
Mary: hi Sierra! I'm having a sleepover party for the girls, wanna come?
Sierra: I would love too! I'll bring cupcakes and popcorn.
Mary: ok. Don't forget your sleeping bag.
Sierra: oh! And that too!
Ryan (grinning): Sleepover Party! Can I come?
Mary: It's a girl party, Ryan.
Ryan: but..
Then the bus took off.
Mary: no buts, It's a girl party, and we're having pink cupcakes, right Sierra?
Sierra: correct! And with red roses made out of icing too!
Ryan: ugh..
Later at Sea-Bill Middle School..........
Bus driver: ok middle-schoolers! Out of the bus!
-All the students gets out of the bus, including Ryan, Mary, and Sierra -
Then everyone went inside to unpack in their lockers. Mary and Sierra's lockers were by each other, while Ryan had his locker across from Sierra 's locker. Everyone got their books and left for class.
Ryan: I don't get it. Why do we have to learn instead of playing around?
Sierra: That was old times Ryan. Now were big. Let's just talk about it later at lunch.
To Be Continued in Chapter two of.....The Mystery Moonlight
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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Thanks!lollipops511 wrote:oh wow! nice story!!
Thanks so much!BabvRocksGirl wrote:Coooool! xD Sounds very interesting! Cant wait to read the 1st chapter (:
Thank you too!barbie6 wrote:that sounds interesting i really want to see it
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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I never knew you were an author of a good-chapter 1!
ConverseGirl- Novice Bear
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ConverseGirl wrote:I never knew you were an author of a good-chapter 1!
thanks so much!
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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np!! i'll keep checking for updates on the second chapter! xD
emmie- Guide Bear
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Of course, you really deserve it. I am writing a story and I really get to publish it!GwynethLove wrote:ConverseGirl wrote:I never knew you were an author of a good-chapter 1!
thanks so much!
ConverseGirl- Novice Bear
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Chapter 2:
When everyone was settled down in their seats, class began. Mrs. Edwards the 6th grade teacher began by teaching Math, at first Ryan wanted to cheat on Sierra's and Mary's papers, but Mrs. Edwards caught him looking at Mary's.
Well when it was lunchtime everyone went to the cafeteria, and Mary and Sierra with Ryan sat at a round table.
Mary: Ryan...
Ryan: I know what you're gonna say,
Sierra: why didi you cheat anyway?
Ryan: umm.. I don't know?
Sierra: Ryan!
Ryan: fine! I didn't study!
Mary: ok, now we know, now Sierra can you come at 4:00 pm so we could get ready? It starts at 6 PM, so we can do it together.
Sierra: I guess I could do that..
Mary: great! Ryan buy the snacks.
Ryan: what!?!
Mary: buy popcorn, cake, and a movie, and candy!
Ryan: wow, what else?
Mary: umm.. that's all
Ryan: ok, I'll buy it.
To be continued in chapter 3 of, The Mystery Moonlight
When everyone was settled down in their seats, class began. Mrs. Edwards the 6th grade teacher began by teaching Math, at first Ryan wanted to cheat on Sierra's and Mary's papers, but Mrs. Edwards caught him looking at Mary's.
Well when it was lunchtime everyone went to the cafeteria, and Mary and Sierra with Ryan sat at a round table.
Mary: Ryan...
Ryan: I know what you're gonna say,
Sierra: why didi you cheat anyway?
Ryan: umm.. I don't know?
Sierra: Ryan!
Ryan: fine! I didn't study!
Mary: ok, now we know, now Sierra can you come at 4:00 pm so we could get ready? It starts at 6 PM, so we can do it together.
Sierra: I guess I could do that..
Mary: great! Ryan buy the snacks.
Ryan: what!?!
Mary: buy popcorn, cake, and a movie, and candy!
Ryan: wow, what else?
Mary: umm.. that's all
Ryan: ok, I'll buy it.
To be continued in chapter 3 of, The Mystery Moonlight
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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it was funny when they made him buy snacks to a party that he cant go to
You've found a SMURF!
You've found a SMURF!
me me me- Novice Bear
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LoL. Good job on the story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
DjAngel145- Novice Bear
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Chapter 3:
After school Ryan started fussing to his friends Todd and Jordan.
Ryan: you see!! I have to buy snacks for Mary's party!
-Todd and Jordan starts laughing-
Todd: good sense of humor!!
-Both laugh again-
Until when Mary and Sierra saw Ryan talking, Todd (who had a crush on Sierra) went up to Sierra.
Todd: hey beautiful..
Sierra: back off!
Todd: why you're s-
Sierra: don't even try and poison me, BACK OFF!
Todd got frustrated at his own crush and left.
Meanwhile Jordan was a nicer one and liked Mary. So Jordan went to Mary.
Jordan: hi Mary.
Mary: you're not acting like Todd, RIGHT?
Jordan: of course not.
-Jordan whispers-
Jordan: i heard you have a sleepover at 6 pm.
Mary: who told you?!?
Jordan: Ryan, of course!
Mary. oh ok. Well see you later, have to go back to talk with Sierra.
Jordan: ok. bye.
So everyone got on the bus. Mary found Sierra sitting alone.
Sierra: over here Mary!
Mary: OK!
So Mary sat down and they were talking.
When the girls were dropped off at their houses Mary got the decorations set.
Mary: oh it looks beautiful!
DING! DONG!
Mary: must be Sierra.
- Mary opens the front door -
Ryan: here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Ryan gives the bags to Mary -
Mary: thanks.. wait u bought Cheetos!?
Ryan: yeah.. why?
Mary: we need them! thanks!
-Mary closes the door -
Then Sierra rang the bell.
DING! DONG!
Mary: oh hi Sierra. come in.
Sierra: sorry its 4:10!
Mary: its ok. Lets put up our sleeping bags and bags in the living room.
The girls did and they set the snacks.
To be continued in Chapter 4..........
After school Ryan started fussing to his friends Todd and Jordan.
Ryan: you see!! I have to buy snacks for Mary's party!
-Todd and Jordan starts laughing-
Todd: good sense of humor!!
-Both laugh again-
Until when Mary and Sierra saw Ryan talking, Todd (who had a crush on Sierra) went up to Sierra.
Todd: hey beautiful..
Sierra: back off!
Todd: why you're s-
Sierra: don't even try and poison me, BACK OFF!
Todd got frustrated at his own crush and left.
Meanwhile Jordan was a nicer one and liked Mary. So Jordan went to Mary.
Jordan: hi Mary.
Mary: you're not acting like Todd, RIGHT?
Jordan: of course not.
-Jordan whispers-
Jordan: i heard you have a sleepover at 6 pm.
Mary: who told you?!?
Jordan: Ryan, of course!
Mary. oh ok. Well see you later, have to go back to talk with Sierra.
Jordan: ok. bye.
So everyone got on the bus. Mary found Sierra sitting alone.
Sierra: over here Mary!
Mary: OK!
So Mary sat down and they were talking.
When the girls were dropped off at their houses Mary got the decorations set.
Mary: oh it looks beautiful!
DING! DONG!
Mary: must be Sierra.
- Mary opens the front door -
Ryan: here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Ryan gives the bags to Mary -
Mary: thanks.. wait u bought Cheetos!?
Ryan: yeah.. why?
Mary: we need them! thanks!
-Mary closes the door -
Then Sierra rang the bell.
DING! DONG!
Mary: oh hi Sierra. come in.
Sierra: sorry its 4:10!
Mary: its ok. Lets put up our sleeping bags and bags in the living room.
The girls did and they set the snacks.
To be continued in Chapter 4..........
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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I made him funny and lazy! He was expressed by one of my friends named Lakota who is funny and lazy.
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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i know right? i was just gonna say that! xD good work GwynDaisyBear3635 wrote:wow its really cool!
ryan's really funny xD
emmie- Guide Bear
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Chapter 4:
After Sierra and Mary got everything set up, Sierra and Mary brought the snacks to the living room and set them down.
(Sierra and Mary both gets some chips)
Sierra: I don't get it.
Mary: what don't you get bff?
Sierra: ...
Mary: just say it, I won't tell.
Sierra: ...boys...
Mary: what about them?
Sierra: .....Todd........
Mary: oh ok.
(Sierra gets frustrated)
Mary: Sierra calm it down!
Sierra: oh fine! Todd is just blowing my head off!
(Sierra calms down)
Mary: we better change in my bedroom upstairs. We're still in our uniform!
( both giggle)
Sierra: OK. Let's go.
They both went upstairs to Mary's bedroom.
(Mary opens her bedroom door)
Mary: Ok. You can come in now.
Sierra: Ok.
(Sierra comes in)
Mary: OK, let's change.
(girls change into pj's)
After they were done changing..
Mary: my brother is home..
Sierra: who?
Mary: ... Brian my brother is home...
( Brian knocks the door)
Brian: MARY! OPEN UP!
( Mary opens her door )
Brian: did you take my black iPod? Because you have a pink iPod.
Mary: of course not! Stephanie might have! She always have your iPod!
Brian: oh ok....
( Brian leaves )
Mary: awkward...
Sierra: I agree.
( Mary looks on her cellphone)
Mary: 5:30. 30 more minutes. Lets go get my nail polish and jewel stickers.
Sierra: we're doing nails?
Mary: yeah.
Sierra: wait! Pizza.
Mary: oh I forgot! I'll call them, pepperoni pizza and a cheese pizza. Good?
Sierra: SWEET!
( Stephanie and Brian scream at each other in Stephanie's Room )
Stephanie: Get Out!!! Brian!!! Get Out!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brian: Give my IPOD!
Stephanie: I DON'T HAVE IT!
Brian: yes you do! Mary doesn't have it!
Stephanie: i do n-!
(Brian pulls her clothes off Stephanie's closet)
Brian: AHA!
(Brian shows his iPod in her face)
Brian: couldn't win huh?
(Mary stares at Stephanie)
Stephanie: I'm gonna get you Mary...
( doorbell rings)
DING! DONG!
( Everyone goes downstairs)
Stephanie: Josh is here so we can go out to the new Sushi place!
(Stephanie opens the door)
Josh: hey.
Stephanie: hey baby!
(Stephanie leaves)
(Brian closes the door)
Brian: I like you better as my best sister Mary.
(Brian pats Mary's head smiling)
Mary: 5:40. 20 minutes left.
Sierra: come on Mary. Lets get the stuff.
To be continued in Chapter 5 of The Mystery Moonlight...
After Sierra and Mary got everything set up, Sierra and Mary brought the snacks to the living room and set them down.
(Sierra and Mary both gets some chips)
Sierra: I don't get it.
Mary: what don't you get bff?
Sierra: ...
Mary: just say it, I won't tell.
Sierra: ...boys...
Mary: what about them?
Sierra: .....Todd........
Mary: oh ok.
(Sierra gets frustrated)
Mary: Sierra calm it down!
Sierra: oh fine! Todd is just blowing my head off!
(Sierra calms down)
Mary: we better change in my bedroom upstairs. We're still in our uniform!
( both giggle)
Sierra: OK. Let's go.
They both went upstairs to Mary's bedroom.
(Mary opens her bedroom door)
Mary: Ok. You can come in now.
Sierra: Ok.
(Sierra comes in)
Mary: OK, let's change.
(girls change into pj's)
After they were done changing..
Mary: my brother is home..
Sierra: who?
Mary: ... Brian my brother is home...
( Brian knocks the door)
Brian: MARY! OPEN UP!
( Mary opens her door )
Brian: did you take my black iPod? Because you have a pink iPod.
Mary: of course not! Stephanie might have! She always have your iPod!
Brian: oh ok....
( Brian leaves )
Mary: awkward...
Sierra: I agree.
( Mary looks on her cellphone)
Mary: 5:30. 30 more minutes. Lets go get my nail polish and jewel stickers.
Sierra: we're doing nails?
Mary: yeah.
Sierra: wait! Pizza.
Mary: oh I forgot! I'll call them, pepperoni pizza and a cheese pizza. Good?
Sierra: SWEET!
( Stephanie and Brian scream at each other in Stephanie's Room )
Stephanie: Get Out!!! Brian!!! Get Out!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brian: Give my IPOD!
Stephanie: I DON'T HAVE IT!
Brian: yes you do! Mary doesn't have it!
Stephanie: i do n-!
(Brian pulls her clothes off Stephanie's closet)
Brian: AHA!
(Brian shows his iPod in her face)
Brian: couldn't win huh?
(Mary stares at Stephanie)
Stephanie: I'm gonna get you Mary...
( doorbell rings)
DING! DONG!
( Everyone goes downstairs)
Stephanie: Josh is here so we can go out to the new Sushi place!
(Stephanie opens the door)
Josh: hey.
Stephanie: hey baby!
(Stephanie leaves)
(Brian closes the door)
Brian: I like you better as my best sister Mary.
(Brian pats Mary's head smiling)
Mary: 5:40. 20 minutes left.
Sierra: come on Mary. Lets get the stuff.
To be continued in Chapter 5 of The Mystery Moonlight...
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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These chapters that I've read are amazing! I cannot wait to read more! :melikey:
Kellz- Forum Events Planner
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Can't wait to read it!GwynethLove wrote:Thanks Kelly! Chapter 5 is coming up!
Kellz- Forum Events Planner
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Chapter 5:
Sierra and Mary got everything done in time when the clock said, 6:00. The girls slapped hive fives and the doorbell rang.
DING! DONG!
( Mary opens the door )
Girls: hi Mary! hi Sierra!
Mary: hi! Come in!
(May Lockwood comes in)
May: hi Mary, thanks for inviting me.
Mary smiled and Carrie then came in. Mary smiles and waves as Sierra showed May and Carrie the living room.
"Where's the pizza guy?" Mary thought. "I called him.."
But anyways, Kim came in next...with her cheer sequence because she was in the cheer squad.
Kim: M-A-R-Y-! G-O-O-O- MARY!
Mary: hi Kim! good cheer!
Kim: thanks.
Sierra came running back, and whispered to Mary.
( Sierra excuses them )
-whispers-
Sierra: where's the pizza guy?
Mary: IDK! I called him!
Sierra: oh.
The girls went back out of the kitchen so they could do their jobs.
Mary: ok next!
Mimi: hi Mary! Glad to come!
Mary: I'm glad you did!
Sierra: hello Mimi, I will show you and Kim where everyone is, please follow me.
( Kim and Mimi follows Sierra to the living room )
Mary: next.
Liz, the richest girl in Sea-Bill Middle School came in, with alot of jewelry bags for everyone, including herself.
Mary: hi Liz, Sierra will take you down to the living room in a moment.
Liz: good.
(Sierra comes in)
Sierra: hi Liz.
Liz: hi...
Sierra frowned a little at Liz. And Mary entered the next guest.
Mary: NEXT!
It was Jane, who wore a red striped cap on her head.
Jane: hey Mary!
Mary: hi J! Glad you made it!
( Jane makes peace sign at Mary )
After EVERYONE came in, the pizza guy named Don came in.
DING! DONG!
(Mary opens the door)
Don: cheese pizza and pepperoni pizza for Mary Lockwood?
Mary: that's me.
Don: ok, $10 please.
( Mary hands him the money )
Don: thank you, here is your pizzas. Enjoy your sleepover party Miss Lockwood.
Mary: thank you.
( Don leaves and Mary closes the door )
Mary: OK girls, PIZZA!
(Girls clap)
To be continued in Chapter 6....
Sierra and Mary got everything done in time when the clock said, 6:00. The girls slapped hive fives and the doorbell rang.
DING! DONG!
( Mary opens the door )
Girls: hi Mary! hi Sierra!
Mary: hi! Come in!
(May Lockwood comes in)
May: hi Mary, thanks for inviting me.
Mary smiled and Carrie then came in. Mary smiles and waves as Sierra showed May and Carrie the living room.
"Where's the pizza guy?" Mary thought. "I called him.."
But anyways, Kim came in next...with her cheer sequence because she was in the cheer squad.
Kim: M-A-R-Y-! G-O-O-O- MARY!
Mary: hi Kim! good cheer!
Kim: thanks.
Sierra came running back, and whispered to Mary.
( Sierra excuses them )
-whispers-
Sierra: where's the pizza guy?
Mary: IDK! I called him!
Sierra: oh.
The girls went back out of the kitchen so they could do their jobs.
Mary: ok next!
Mimi: hi Mary! Glad to come!
Mary: I'm glad you did!
Sierra: hello Mimi, I will show you and Kim where everyone is, please follow me.
( Kim and Mimi follows Sierra to the living room )
Mary: next.
Liz, the richest girl in Sea-Bill Middle School came in, with alot of jewelry bags for everyone, including herself.
Mary: hi Liz, Sierra will take you down to the living room in a moment.
Liz: good.
(Sierra comes in)
Sierra: hi Liz.
Liz: hi...
Sierra frowned a little at Liz. And Mary entered the next guest.
Mary: NEXT!
It was Jane, who wore a red striped cap on her head.
Jane: hey Mary!
Mary: hi J! Glad you made it!
( Jane makes peace sign at Mary )
After EVERYONE came in, the pizza guy named Don came in.
DING! DONG!
(Mary opens the door)
Don: cheese pizza and pepperoni pizza for Mary Lockwood?
Mary: that's me.
Don: ok, $10 please.
( Mary hands him the money )
Don: thank you, here is your pizzas. Enjoy your sleepover party Miss Lockwood.
Mary: thank you.
( Don leaves and Mary closes the door )
Mary: OK girls, PIZZA!
(Girls clap)
To be continued in Chapter 6....
GwynethLove- BABV Events Planner
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Nice story, Gwyneth! Post the next update soon ^^
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